...满分10分)初中生活即将过去,回顾初中三年的学校生活,有满意的也有...

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Dear friends,
How time flies and I’ll graduate from the school soon. Think back to the three years, I’ve learned a lot .I have been studying hard and have developed/formed good study habits since I entered the middle school. As a result, I always get good marks in my exams. And I am always ready to help my classmates when they are in trouble. What’s more, I am a good listener when my classmates tell me their unhappy feelings. So I have some friends, we help each other with study and life.
However，I took less exercise and seldom took part in social public activities because there was always too much homework to do. I didn’t have enough time to do so . But this summer I am going to take part in some social public activities. For example, I ’ll volunteer my time to join in a clean- up campaign.
I hope my experience can help you.
Yours
Nancy

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